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You deserve ten (**********) stars for one of your best ever stories!
Susan, don't stop writing and submitting your stories. You are by far one of the best authors on Literotica, if not , indeed, the BEST!
Really enjoy reading them.
actually good writing ;)
nicely written with very strong emotional content
I liked it
A good story, it held my interest, you had me rooting for Charlotte from the first few paragraphs.
Wonderful story with a unexpected, yet perfect ending! Thanks Susan :)
Only a master author, writer, storyteller could construct a feature like this and that person is our own Susan Jill Parker! While when first starting to read, I thought - Oh No a wanna be skinny girl who is a two ton tessie is going to give us all the reasons for not loosing weight and being fat, obese, or with a whales body. I'm not a fan of ladies who don't care for their bodies, overweight or pleasingly plump I can deal with but fat and slobby-absolutely not! Saddened to hear of Charlotte's mother's early demise and what seems like a dead end job, the story really perks up with the basketball theme and I don't even enjoy sports, but was attuned to her progress as she kept at her goals. The remainder of the story was a complete surprise and the icing on the cake-also the reason I gave it five-stars. Susan Jill Parker has to be the best thing on Literotica since sliced bread, Even with absolutely no physical sex, this has to be the best story I've read all summer! Continue onward SJP, your fans await! Thanks for the smiles and making an otherwise dreary day filled with sunshine! :) jaybird :) (Maybe I should try basketball :) )
Good luck in the contest
You just made summer hotter!
skinny and anorexic girls can be boring
Well most guys like a Chubby,busty woman and some flesh on the body and not just bones and what about the craze for big busty mature women. Watching a pretty face and a skinny body is sexy but a pretty big busty mature woman is very sexy! and exciting.
well done
Very good reading! I have always had a problem with lengthy stories, but this was worth it.
Keep it up!
Fabulous work
Susan,
I don't know what to say about this story. It is simply stupendous and professionally written. I have been a journalist for 45 years and have never read anything as engrossing as this. I've certainly never written one. Please keep up the fantastic writing.
Love
Ron
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