I like the seduction. Hope you plan to continue the story.
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Anonymous08/21/14
Very nice. I hope there will be more.
Just one little peeve: ... hands to the snap of the bra between her two boobs.
Most women have a pair; delete 'two' and you're done. Thanks for a good tale and please continue with it.
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Anonymous08/21/14
More
Great start to a series
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Anonymous08/21/14
Home run...
This one leaves me wanting to read more, PLEASE!!!!
For a shorter story I thought it was very good, I look forward to reading more of your stories. I will share this one with my wife, I think she would enjoy this one too.
at least she gets some help around the house,
till she doesn't live there anymore.
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Anonymous08/22/14
A+
sir after I read your lovely story I have to agree with the first post too.. her married won't last long but you know what.. you got potential as a good writer
I found this story Super hot and well done! I think you need to continue this one as far and as long as you can!! good job!
I'd also like to read more of this adventure and see how Janet and Billy move on from their first encounter. Maybe next time won't be quite so accidental.
Thank you for sharing....
RecHiker
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Anonymous08/24/14
Nice Idea
"Accidental" may be a little questionable but I guess that's allowable even though it's obvious she'd been wanting to get ahold of his cock for some time. Let's get her fucked next chapter as my erection is causing just a little trouble!
Nice beginning
I like the seduction. Hope you plan to continue the story.
Very nice. I hope there will be more.
Just one little peeve: ... hands to the snap of the bra between her two boobs.
Most women have a pair; delete 'two' and you're done. Thanks for a good tale and please continue with it.
More
Great start to a series
Home run...
This one leaves me wanting to read more, PLEASE!!!!
For a shorter story I thought it was very good, I look forward to reading more of your stories. I will share this one with my wife, I think she would enjoy this one too.
Well written
A great start and i look forward to more! Keep it up man
wow hot hot hot another chapter
so much for commitment to her marriage
but not to worry, It won't last much longer now.
at least she gets some help around the house,
till she doesn't live there anymore.
A+
sir after I read your lovely story I have to agree with the first post too.. her married won't last long but you know what.. you got potential as a good writer
I found this story Super hot and well done! I think you need to continue this one as far and as long as you can!! good job!
Why shouldn't it last
Hubby is away on business and both she and Billy need the sex. I can't wait till he is eating her like a good son.
Great story, would love to see a sequel.
Very nice start...
I'd also like to read more of this adventure and see how Janet and Billy move on from their first encounter. Maybe next time won't be quite so accidental.
Thank you for sharing....
RecHiker
Nice Idea
"Accidental" may be a little questionable but I guess that's allowable even though it's obvious she'd been wanting to get ahold of his cock for some time. Let's get her fucked next chapter as my erection is causing just a little trouble!
Nicely Done
Interesting way to turn a relationship.
short but sweet
thanks for the story.
Must Better than Swimming Pool Trick
Definitely more erotic than Swimming Pool Trick story.
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