So she beats him raw, he doesn't cry so he wins? What was this story about? Why was she beating him? Why was he allowing her to beat him? It simply made no sense and was therefore not interesting or entertaining to read.
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So she beats him raw, he doesn't cry so he wins? What was this story about? Why was she beating him? Why was he allowing her to beat him? It simply made no sense and was therefore not interesting or entertaining to read.
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