Well done story. I do believe some 'turn about is fair play' is in order. Or a move to BDSM category if this goes much further. Definitely falls on the light side of that category.
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Anonymous09/09/14
The story developed nicely with good erotic interplay between these strong characters. The language used to set the historical context and the scenes was engaging. I was looking forward to the continuing adventures of Lady Jane and Sir William. Chapter 2 certainly takes their story further.
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Well done story. I do believe some 'turn about is fair play' is in order. Or a move to BDSM category if this goes much further. Definitely falls on the light side of that category.
The story developed nicely with good erotic interplay between these strong characters. The language used to set the historical context and the scenes was engaging. I was looking forward to the continuing adventures of Lady Jane and Sir William. Chapter 2 certainly takes their story further.
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