Prototype F-96 Pt. 02

Been a while since I read something so good!

Hot, original, great pace. Keep up the good work!

A new Gem

glad I came across this story... I hope to return to more chapters soon

thanks but no thanks

"some people were requesting incest, i will not be involving any in future stories because i personally don't like it at all."

Guess I won't be reading any further chapters then.

That's a new one. Someone who won't read a good story because it DOESN"T have incest. Takes all types I suppose.

Great Job

Enjoyed the freshness of your stories as well as the novelty. Your readers were treated to the same surprise as your main character.... namely, Wow this thing really does something fun. Please continue to write, your style is refreshing and exciting.

No incest?

To the Incest lover,
The story is in the "Mind Control' section, I think you want the "Incest/Taboo stories" section. I like mind control stories and trying to develop one. I like incest also but will read ALL stories that interest me.
To Nemohoes, love the way your story is developing. Keep them short and erotic. Extra long stories make me skip through trying to hold my interest. Ready for the next part!

Question

Do you plan to make it like a harem story?

From the author

I don't know, should I? Any suggestions are welcome.

Love the story

Yeah. It's so much better without the incest. Your character doesn't seem the type to turn the remote on his family. As far as Harem goes. That's a good way to take it, after all you already stated that even after the use of the remote the "Subjects" still want him.

hmm

What would happen if the remote was turned on a guy?

Excellent submission

Incredibly hot

yes to harem!

i agree with the others, making it a harem story would be really sexy. Since you have said you don't care for incest it could give him a way to move out and continue to enjoy the women he came across. Maybe he could move in with one of them down the line.

SEX

His mother

Very hot....

.....and fun, in a high school sort of way....but that's where we have the most rampant sexual fantasies, isn't it?
Keep going!

please edit the errors

one of many was skinny fat body shape, what the fuck is that? I like lactation stories and mind control but please make an effort or get an editor. this section always needs cool ideas like this but quality writers even ,ore. thanks