All Comments on 'The Invisible Man'

by Bones Malone

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Expected Silliness

How very nice that you kept the silliness out, and let the eroticism in!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
The Stuff Dreams Are Made Of

I wonder if it could ever happen? And if so, I want to test drive one of those caps.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Good storyyyy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
good story...

I just wish it lasted longer!

you have a lot of girls to cover you know... =P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
story

Great story should write more about this

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Good use of details. I liked it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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Wow, porn to real love xD Nice story, it actually had a good plot and wasnt just porn

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
THE AUTHOR IF CORRECT

if you close your eyes you cant see him. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Awe cute ending!

SquigwordSquigwordover 4 years ago
Well alright

What I liked was his honesty and compassion.although in the fantasy realm anything goes.you managed to make him a decent person but the invisible catch definitely was a turn on .enjoyed the story.

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