All Comments on 'Serial Lover Ch. 04'

Thank you for coming back!

Can't wait for the next Chapter. well done!

Give us an update on when Chapter 5 might be posted. This is equal parts fascinating and creepy. I am curious as to how he became this man.

Sick, twisted fuck... and i can't wait to read more

But I love the story. Don't wait so long to write next chapter.

I've been waiting for for this chapter for two years and this is all I get, come on give me more PLEASE

Love how twisted this story is! Aside from the grammar and some odd sentencing, this is a solid chapter.

The cult sounds absolutely crazy. She has no relatives now. Poor girl. Is there a chance of her getting some payback? So twisted and addicting!

This is a really good story. I'm looking forward to see where you take the next chapters. Please don't fizzle out the story. There are so many stories on here that just never get finished. I understand you have a busy life but please give your readers an ending if nothing else.

Please Finish it, it's a great story.

Love to see a update soon on this story!

This story is seriously movie material man.

Please I would love to read part five! Very well done.

Would love to read the next part

Normally I don't comment on stories but this story is fantastic. I'm dying for more! Please keep writing!

I read a ton on dark erotica and this is GREAT! I can't wait to read more!

I seldom leave comments, but I have to encourage you with this story!

Really fantastic, can't wait for more!

Last comments were from a year ago so I'm sure this is a long shot but if there is more pleaseeee post it?!

Unless you see a chapter 5+, don't waste your time.

Interesting story with plenty of great buildup and 4 chapters of no sex. That was fine if the story continued since the sex was clearly coming and the buildup was excellent.

Too bad.

Just one more decent story that goes unfinished. Too bad.