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All In A Days Work

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by Anonymous

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by vaboater08/24/14

Good story, left me wanting more.

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by gotrane08/24/14

A Little Nasty!

A little nasty, at the end, yet still a fantasy to enjoy !

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by Anonymous08/25/14

Shows promise

Good storyline.
Grammatical and spelling errors were distracting.
Suggest you get help with editing before submitting.
Many here only too happy to assist.
Keep writing.

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by Anonymous08/25/14

Keep it coming. As I grew up I dreamed of this fantasy often.

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