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all is well
all is well in your tale. It ended on a happy note. with your eyes wide open, you
knew the deal, took the deal and had a happy life. short happy tale. If only
life worked out for everyone that way. nice tale.
Good, although...
...it seemed rushed. There was enough detail to inform us, but the courtship, sex and relationship felt rushed. This could have been 4 pages and been a 4 or 5. What you have is good, but it just needs more fleshing out.
It could well be a true story...
Is it?
nice
lucky guy good for him
Pedestrian
Written by a typical Japanophile... predictable except the part about moving to the US. That part really is fantasy.
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