Hot & fun again, but I think that a detailed description of the girls' transformation would have substantially raised the heat index.
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Anonymous08/28/14
Great Writing
You write very well! I had to jack off before ending the story. I had to reread again and jack off again. Please continue to write. You might want to check out this author on literotica: silkstockingslover. You both write very well and sexually charged.
Ray
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Anonymous08/31/14
MORE!
This has been a great story so far, I don't want to keep waiting for the next chapter!!
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Great story!
I'm hoping the sexy succubus has more tricks up her sleeve than just an expanding tongue.
i do hope she wins in the end
Delightfully corrupting
Hot & fun again, but I think that a detailed description of the girls' transformation would have substantially raised the heat index.
Great Writing
You write very well! I had to jack off before ending the story. I had to reread again and jack off again. Please continue to write. You might want to check out this author on literotica: silkstockingslover. You both write very well and sexually charged.
Ray
MORE!
This has been a great story so far, I don't want to keep waiting for the next chapter!!
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