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Small clouds...darker gray
is a filler stanza, is there any other purpose for it?
End is also expected, this is a walk through from a good poet, but a walk thru
Simmer is here, winter will come, and I am idling with my words, because that is what poets do.And holy shit, I just wrote a poem thing.
Simmer is here....
A walk through
A lovely summer day. A sweet mundane memory, to carry you through the cold times ahead. I enjoyed it.
Lovely
One of your really good ones. The feeling and build up are lovely and the final verse is judged just so well.
OldBear , you draw masterly,
marvelous word pictures ----did I forget to add " breath-takin'" as well ? 5-ed .
What a stunning landscape
...worthy of hanging over any mantelpiece
Beautiful imagery
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