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Sorry, the back and forth story telling was annoying.
"... the slit ended about a kilometer above her knee"
Come on WillieMac, a kilometer is 0.68 miles! Just how long are her legs. The second paragraph ended it for me.
I like it!
The suspense is killing me.
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I liked it. It was different. I wasn't at all confused and the kilometer thing, well, sorry the poor fellow took it literally.
MichaelG
great story
great story so far love to see the rest of the vacation soon. sounds exciting
read it twice
and still have no idea what is going on.
self-conciously campy ?
I enjoyed it, but was at no point aroused by it. This was trying too hard to be naturally sensual (much like present day J-Lo ). Kudos, if the author designed the narrative that way on purpose. So Montenegro is actually nice in August ?
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