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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/28/14

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I love the premise and everything about it, but . . . It needs elaboration - run with it!

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by Anonymous09/01/14

Rushed

I kinda like the usage of the 2nd person vantage point but it seems very rushed, and
Lacks detail to start with

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