All Comments on 'Man Disciplines Sissy Ch. 01'

you cannot leave it there ,more please .

Lana,

I love the beginning to your story... Well written and has the intensity that most of us enjoy:)

Please continue,

erica

Well written and moved at right pace . Really got the feeling you knew what it was like for first timer

I love this. I have been in that position too many times to count, at the mercy of a big strong man, stinging cheeks after a spanking, knowing what I'm going to have to do next. Please continue, LanaBehave, pretty please. Please do tell me more. Take me further.

Oh Yes indeed, a Quality story . I kept stopping every sentence to go over again n again what I had just read as I pleasured myself .

Thankyou and can we Please Please PLEASE have some more

Thanks for comments! Yes there will be a part two, soon...

I read this because I was checking out your profile in the bare bottom spanking chat room. Although I'm not big on the sissy thing, I have to say your writing is really very descriptive, and you lead your reader through with a great deal of detail. In terms of creating an image in my mind and a degree of arousal, this is a very successful piece of work.

You entice the reader. You make me feel as though I'm about to get you and then you leave me hanging for the next chapter. Some would call you a tease, but I call you a Seductress.

To say that you drew me in would not be completely accurate. Lana you have me on a leash now and I feel compelled to read on through the chapters. The way you portray the emotions of the character is as though any of us could have lived it. Weather we dress or not. Absolutely wonderful. I will be reading on :)

I have found spanking to be another 'tool' in the sexual toy box. Like any other toy that can be found there ... among other things. You really captured its use in the dom/sub way very well without sadism. I found the discipline erotic & the emotions of the heroine felts real. My own heart was pounding with excitement. I look forward to future chapters. Thank you for crafting and sharing this with us! Hugs, Jenna

Can't wait to read the next parts - my little sissy cock is getting hard! xx

Oh! It made me simply want to be his girl! To be cared for like that, makes me squirm all over! I so want a Daddy who will treat me like that! Please? mcanoe84@yahoo.com

Very arousing, Lovely beginning, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

He certainly took control quickly! Love the emotional reactions!

Starting back now at the beginning…

Ooh. And what a start. I recognize your description of how one feels when dressing.

And of course a girl will take more time to get ready with final touches before a date! Can’t imagine why a male would be so upset… unless, of course, that was the plan…

My mind wanders whether in prior texting he’d shown any signs of anger or impatience. More than just being an admirer. In retrospect, I’m thinking it would have been best just to walk down to the lobby. Of course, it was going to end this way anyhow, wasn’t it?! ;)

You’ve described well, and I can keenly imagine, the strength of the grip of his hand on your wrist, and being placed in certain ways and spanked. Tenting here…Thank you! Sara

Great story!

O my! So happy to have chatted you. I can’t wait to read chapter two!!

Hi, Sweetie. Just read part one. Moving on to the next.

Hot stuff ! I like how your naughty mind works 😉