I loved the story. but I would like if wrote the second part to the story with mom son and aunt in it soon please. I would grade the story more then a five but the story just
stops if it had gone on in two more ch. I would be giving it a high rateing . please
write more I hope I have not affended you .
That was a very hot story. I loved it and had to masturbate right away. I will probably masturbate again when I go into sleep.
The first time my son fucked me was so intense and then orgasm was wonderful.
Fantastic story
Looking forward to part 2 when Aunt gets involved
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Anonymous01/16/15
LOVE TO HAVE THE STORY OF THE THREESOME
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Anonymous01/20/15
I was enjoying the story fine until the bullshit anal scene. Some huge dick and a little bit of spit for lube? No stretching? No. Fucking. Way. She would have screamed bloody murder, spun around and started nut punching the stupid bastard!! If he did manage to get in the pain would not have gone away, he would have ripped the fuck out of her and she would have been bleeding for days. Thats fucking reality. Last thing you need to do is give some dumbass hick the idea that he can up and ass fuck some girl with no planning or patience and she's gonna like it. Hell even with all that she may still hate it.
Don't write about shit you don't know. Hell guys shouldnt write about anal anyway,yeesh!
First of all, I love hearing the story from this point of view and from the mothers perspective. It makes her resignation to give in to her desires that much more arousing. The story is tremendous. Well written and descriptive. Please continue with the next instalment.
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Anonymous04/01/15
Two Tissues!
Character buildup and more plot-line are great, but that's no why I read Literotica stories.
I came twice reading your story and stroking my cock.
Thanks!
This is one of my highest-rated stories (4.60 rating / 364,606 views / 441 favorites). You are high if you think that I would take an anonymous douchebag's demand to stop posting stories.
How about you post a story first and If you can get a higher score than my lowest scoring story (5th Anniversary to Remember - 4.55), I'd consider it. I'm not very worried though since you would probably write your story in all caps.
Mello, I find it interesting when people comment on things they themselves have never tried or done. A tongue circling your asshole plus a cock entering it - most people have never tried it. Note: Not to mention the preparation taken to correctly satisfy your partner.
I found many memories in this story. I only wish I had been endowed as Luke was.
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Anonymous07/10/15
Chapter 2: Mom and Aunt Lara together
When is the 2nd chapter going to be available. Can't wait to read that one also!!
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Anonymous07/14/15
If you're not gonna do a sequel, you might want to consider revising the ending.
The ending implied a sequel. There really wasn't any other reason to add the line of him suggesting the threesome. Instead of ending the story, it opens it up. If you don't want to do a sequel, that's your prerogative. However, you might want to consider revising the story.
Even just changing his request to wondering if they can do it in the bed next time would be better. It's pretty much implied this was not the only time they would fuck. Such a line would only confirm this, and such a scene would be rather redundant to what was in this story.
i wanna read more about him fucking his mother & his aunt being involved. maybe involve some of the lonely horny housewives from the spin & voga classes his mother & aunt attend. but would really like to read more chapters.
Hot Anal Mom/Son action. Hope you write a sequel to this. We loved reading it with my nephews cock up My ass. Fuuuck so nice with it buried in me, Filled my Butt when Luke unloaded in his Moms ass. Would love to see Aunt Linda get the same done to her. We always like a Hot Steamy story when we fuck. Incest is Best!!!!
What a story. An incredible buildup, and a climaxing ending.
I don't know if anything like this has ever happened before but I want it to happen to me now - too bad I'm way past the puberty curve.
I'm going to read your other stories hoping they will get me off like this one.
Thanks!
English
good story
I loved the story. but I would like if wrote the second part to the story with mom son and aunt in it soon please. I would grade the story more then a five but the story just
stops if it had gone on in two more ch. I would be giving it a high rateing . please
write more I hope I have not affended you .
damn...hot
when are posting the second part, with the aunt?
Great
That was a very hot story. I loved it and had to masturbate right away. I will probably masturbate again when I go into sleep.
The first time my son fucked me was so intense and then orgasm was wonderful.
Mary
m330g430@yahoo.com
awesome
Moe please
Can't wait
Can't wait to read about Lara. lol Got to be good. Don't make us wait too long.
good for a Chinese reader to learn foreign cultures
So the housewife is so free and can do whatever she wants to do, amazing. The development of the son's big cock is worth a good research.
Wonderful
Fantastic story
Looking forward to part 2 when Aunt gets involved
LOVE TO HAVE THE STORY OF THE THREESOME
I was enjoying the story fine until the bullshit anal scene. Some huge dick and a little bit of spit for lube? No stretching? No. Fucking. Way. She would have screamed bloody murder, spun around and started nut punching the stupid bastard!! If he did manage to get in the pain would not have gone away, he would have ripped the fuck out of her and she would have been bleeding for days. Thats fucking reality. Last thing you need to do is give some dumbass hick the idea that he can up and ass fuck some girl with no planning or patience and she's gonna like it. Hell even with all that she may still hate it.
Don't write about shit you don't know. Hell guys shouldnt write about anal anyway,yeesh!
OMG! Awesome!
We need this story to go on! Please continue this amazing take!
Mom and Aunt! You read my dirty mind. I love it.
Awesome
First of all, I love hearing the story from this point of view and from the mothers perspective. It makes her resignation to give in to her desires that much more arousing. The story is tremendous. Well written and descriptive. Please continue with the next instalment.
Two Tissues!
Character buildup and more plot-line are great, but that's no why I read Literotica stories.
I came twice reading your story and stroking my cock.
Thanks!
Cool
What a boys dream
Lol!
This is one of my highest-rated stories (4.60 rating / 364,606 views / 441 favorites). You are high if you think that I would take an anonymous douchebag's demand to stop posting stories.
How about you post a story first and If you can get a higher score than my lowest scoring story (5th Anniversary to Remember - 4.55), I'd consider it. I'm not very worried though since you would probably write your story in all caps.
Weird...
The anonymous comment that I responded to with the "LoL" title disappeared.
Well written
I was surprised when I read your profile, I would have sworn you were female.
WELL DONE!
Cute and entertaining
I really liked it! 5*
People - Never
Mello, I find it interesting when people comment on things they themselves have never tried or done. A tongue circling your asshole plus a cock entering it - most people have never tried it. Note: Not to mention the preparation taken to correctly satisfy your partner.
I found many memories in this story. I only wish I had been endowed as Luke was.
Chapter 2: Mom and Aunt Lara together
When is the 2nd chapter going to be available. Can't wait to read that one also!!
If you're not gonna do a sequel, you might want to consider revising the ending.
The ending implied a sequel. There really wasn't any other reason to add the line of him suggesting the threesome. Instead of ending the story, it opens it up. If you don't want to do a sequel, that's your prerogative. However, you might want to consider revising the story.
Even just changing his request to wondering if they can do it in the bed next time would be better. It's pretty much implied this was not the only time they would fuck. Such a line would only confirm this, and such a scene would be rather redundant to what was in this story.
more please,that was hot
need chapters for this 1
i wanna read more about him fucking his mother & his aunt being involved. maybe involve some of the lonely horny housewives from the spin & voga classes his mother & aunt attend. but would really like to read more chapters.
Good story
When you going to write the 3way story? I love hearing about Mom and aunt sex.
need alot more . gave a 5 worth 20
keep going with the story.
Hot!!!!
OMG that was soon hot - I love it - watch out if I have a boy when I marry
Really HOT !
Please continue this story, it has lots of potential.
Ramjet
Perfect. Need more seduction
will you a second chapter
want see when get a hot cock up her ass from him
Short and sweet
Hot Anal Mom/Son action. Hope you write a sequel to this. We loved reading it with my nephews cock up My ass. Fuuuck so nice with it buried in me, Filled my Butt when Luke unloaded in his Moms ass. Would love to see Aunt Linda get the same done to her. We always like a Hot Steamy story when we fuck. Incest is Best!!!!
Loved it!
Gives new meaning to "butt texting".
5 Stars
OMFG! WOW! DAMN!
What a story. An incredible buildup, and a climaxing ending.
I don't know if anything like this has ever happened before but I want it to happen to me now - too bad I'm way past the puberty curve.
I'm going to read your other stories hoping they will get me off like this one.
Thanks!
Like summertime Phoenix ...
...this is hot! 5 Stars!
Hot
Just read this again and for 3 out of 4 times.
I managed to shoot my load in my mouth and some on my face.and swallow all I could.
Thanks.
Ok sisters
Bring on Aunt Lara.It is time for the threesom.
please make happen
mello you need to bring this story back with the aunt as much the aunt wants to fuck her nephew
Holy shit
Damn good !! Can't wait for my wife to read this while I play with her. Bring on the Aunt.
Bonding
Absolutely one of the best stories ever. Can't wait to see what happens when his Aunt cum over.
Great Story
You should add second chapter with three some with his mom and aunt
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