I really enjoyed this story. It was short, it was to the point, but it still evoked the feeling that these two characters loved each other a lot. The sexual descriptions were tender while still maintaining a sense of urgency. I can only find one instance where you're word choice wasn't stellar (You used grit when clench or some other word probably would have been better), but this was by far the exception and not the rule. A very nice read.
English
Soooo sweet.
Truly, love is . . .
. . . aroused and showered with kisses. Tender and warm, with or without a T-shirt.
A very sweet short story
I really enjoyed this story. It was short, it was to the point, but it still evoked the feeling that these two characters loved each other a lot. The sexual descriptions were tender while still maintaining a sense of urgency. I can only find one instance where you're word choice wasn't stellar (You used grit when clench or some other word probably would have been better), but this was by far the exception and not the rule. A very nice read.
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