You set the scene quite well. This appears to be headed in a direction similar to a series you did a few years ago about a nude scuba vacation (I think you wrote that). I enjoyed that series greatly.
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Anonymous09/01/14
A start,
but much to go to geta story complete.
Move as slowly as the start and let it develop into whatever combinations may occur.
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Anonymous01/01/15
Expectant
I was really hoping that there would be a follow up to this story. I am hoping to take some friends there myself some day.
English
kind of short
Maybe make your stories a bit longer and with more action in it?
I like it..
I like the set up for the theme of the story. I'll look forward to the next chapter which I hope is a little longer.
Thanks for sharing.
RecHiker
Great Story
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nice Start
You set the scene quite well. This appears to be headed in a direction similar to a series you did a few years ago about a nude scuba vacation (I think you wrote that). I enjoyed that series greatly.
A start,
but much to go to geta story complete.
Move as slowly as the start and let it develop into whatever combinations may occur.
Expectant
I was really hoping that there would be a follow up to this story. I am hoping to take some friends there myself some day.
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