Well done but I would like to see the jealousy end. Their love should be a beautiful, loving thing about giving pleasure as much if not more than getting it. Love and let love. Please keep this going.
Amazing follow up. Can't wait for chapter 3!
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Well done but I would like to see the jealousy end. Their love should be a beautiful, loving thing about giving pleasure as much if not more than getting it. Love and let love. Please keep this going.
Wow!
Amazing follow up. Can't wait for chapter 3!
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