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The Dual of the Parallels Ch. 08

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by Anonymous08/28/14

please dont take too long....

This is a really good story and with the new twist that you have now, it had become even more interesting. So please...please do give it the ending it deserves. Waiting.

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by erotikpassions08/28/14

Wow!

I mean wow good...Interesting story and the twists are like always amazing. Few mistakes here and there especially with the tenses and such but nothing to take the goodness from the story. Looking forward to more, yeah, unfortunately for you, we'll keep asking for more without giving you much in return.

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