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by indieboy

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Shealy_ChristopherShealy_Christopheralmost 17 years ago
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Very clean, and easy to read. I love the length of the story as well. I'd love to see more work from you, keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Is that the end of the saga then?

The story has to go on further than that, perhaps into brown.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I like the two-piece split, and I think you finished at a perfect point.

I read the stories out of order, but I think this second part improved the pacing over the first.

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