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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/30/14

Hot story

Big fan of this story! The writer has a good grasp of erotica. The girl in the story sounds like a sexy piece of ass! Woukdnt mind taking her too!

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by Anonymous08/31/14

Huh?

If she's only wearing panties, how does she pull her top down. Please find an editor.

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by Mike_Madison08/31/14

Says she's wearing a top in the second paragraph. Good to know you are paying attention to details. But thanks for the criticism. Hope to read your anonymous story soon!

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