knowing that this "last" chapter is only the final entry in this series
and that this series is only the first in a wonderful trilogy
the ending sends me forward in anticipation rather than bother me.
From here DonnaBeck continues leading us through this intriguing cast of seeming misfits by focusing on Tracy the - Flower Girl.
So, do not despair, the saga continues. I just wish the author would put a notice at the start of Flower Girl and Runner Girl to suggest the reader start the trilogy at the beginning. It flows so much nicer in sequence. Subway - Flower - Runner
"his daughter had hugged a guy out of near homelessness"
This story is simply incredible. I don't know polite words to describe what I was looking for when I encountered "Subway Girl" but your work completely blindsided me. I intended to spend fifteen minutes on this site before bed and was instead sweept away on night long emotional journey.
I wish I could better articulate how moving your story was, all I can really say is thank you for sharing this piece of art with us.
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Anonymous01/06/17
4am...
... and now I can finally go to bed because I have finished this series. Simply brilliant.
English
Wow[squared]
Exponentially amazing story. Well done, well written, well told.
knowing that this "last" chapter is only the final entry in this series
and that this series is only the first in a wonderful trilogy
the ending sends me forward in anticipation rather than bother me.
From here DonnaBeck continues leading us through this intriguing cast of seeming misfits by focusing on Tracy the - Flower Girl.
So, do not despair, the saga continues. I just wish the author would put a notice at the start of Flower Girl and Runner Girl to suggest the reader start the trilogy at the beginning. It flows so much nicer in sequence. Subway - Flower - Runner
"his daughter had hugged a guy out of near homelessness"
The most
One of the most wonderful stories I've read on Lit! Highly recommended, Five Stars!
Can't wait to read your others. Thank you.
A Diamond
This story is simply incredible. I don't know polite words to describe what I was looking for when I encountered "Subway Girl" but your work completely blindsided me. I intended to spend fifteen minutes on this site before bed and was instead sweept away on night long emotional journey.
I wish I could better articulate how moving your story was, all I can really say is thank you for sharing this piece of art with us.
4am...
... and now I can finally go to bed because I have finished this series. Simply brilliant.
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