Denise Brings Home a Cream Pie

loser

I guess every wife wants a loser nowadays. Maybe if they all get their wish, there will be only losers available.

GREAT Story!

Great story for those of us who may get off on being submissive to more dominant men and women! There's a TON of potential to develop this story. PLEASE add more chapters!!!!!

Seriously?

Why can't you people put these into the right category!! This is a FETISH not LOVING WIFE!! Please keep this in the dark where it belongs.

He's not going to be a great Father

In fact, he's not going to be a Father. Drew is going to be the Father and he can pay for the kid. Time to get divorced and move on. There certainly isn't any loving wife here. This crap should be in fetish. Oh and get an editor. So many mistakes.

Wrong category

One star. Wrong category.

Nice

My only critique is that it moves on a little too quick. There is no real hesitation in the hubby's part before the actual fun begins with him. Aside from that, I disagree that it's in the wrong catagory, she brought home a creampie from another man.

Aside from what I mentioned, I think you did a good job.

*

Trash. What else is new?

Wrong category

The wife has a husband as a slave. There is no fucking love anywhere. This should be in the FETISH or BDSM category.

When...

When a wife says or think about her love for husband: "the love for my husband Rich had grown, but it changed, and become more like the love one has for a brother or sister!!" A question must be put: Why stay married, if they dodn't have children? It's so sad and so low character just stay married because he provided for her financially and emotionally...She showed how a low human being she is...Of course he is a sad man with no self-respect, but at least he truly loved her...

Quibble

Several times it is asserted that Hubby cannot impregnate (and certainly has not impregnated) Sweetie. I can understand her not wanting to soil the recent sensation of her Bull's fucking her silly, but the rationale that Hubby's sperm would compete with Bull's is patently irrelevant.

Very pedestrian in theme and execution. Get an editor! The main opportunity to make this accounting erotic, and establish Sweetie's credentials as an adventurous wife, was SKIPPED!

2*

What is wrong with people , man or woman with any self respect would act this way and if one did the other would rid of the other immediately .

what is love

Always wonder in these stories the definition of love the character means as they spout off. It has no meaning. Cannot have love without respect and caring. None of that is shown. Characters are not worthy of attention by the reader. Story not worth the time it took to read.

It seems the goal here.....

....is to demean anyone that isn't a jock and a gym rat. It also seems that you cuck-writers all seem to think that every jock has a monster cock.
Anyone that's played competitive sports knows that simply is no so.
The sad part about this storyline is that it continues to be one of the most overworked in the genre. Note, I did not say popular.
Why don't you do something novel, something that has the cheating wife scenario, but where her hubby is a well endowed jock-type of the kind usually so sought after by the cheating wives in these story types....and have her throw him over for a guy who invents things and is very wealthy, but is also very healthy and has a magic dick that is just her size?
Where's the fun in that, right? Anyone but another muscle head....that's all I ask.

wrong category

Should be fetish.

Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!

Ignore the stupid trolls who read story's they don't like.

Not bad as all. Rich is a cuckold and his wife already has ideas to fem him and let him be a hot sissy cum slut. Now she just has to get a chastity cage for his tiny little boy dicklet. Oh she can still rub his prostate, using fingers, toys, strap on. Till he is ready for a Stud like Drew to fuck and breed him right. But she should have a pan of some sort to catch his goo drips and leaks. Then make him eat and clean it all. Swallowing. Sissy gurls should not make messes. Rich is going to have so much fun as a sissy. In chastity.

Of course devilspy is a fucking retard.

Ignore him, your story isn't even worth 1*.

Quit writing, you suck.

Thanks for writing this. Great job.

:-)

WACC

. Stupid. Total lack of creativity.