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XCOM: Operation Burning Skull

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by Anonymous08/28/14

Not bad

Not bad...but its hard to improve on the story provided by the game with itself. The ending was a bit rushed. I think the best part of the game is when you get too cocky and take that one extra step that springs several aliens. It's a big "oh shit" moment. You should build on that.

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by JohnKutensky08/28/14

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Thanks! I tried to have one "oh shit" moment where Kim got shot, but if I were being more realistic, everyone would have died to Thin Men crits.

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