The Teacher of Merrowland Ch. 00

do continue...looks a good start

Great Start

You have to continue, you have a great start here. Have to see where your story goes.

More!

Have her do Sophia's boyfriend next time!

What Do We Have Here...

...Wow, erotic as all hell, your writing is excellent (well, for a teacher it would be, lol!) Yes, please do continue with Miss Austin, thank you for sharing her, really would like to know her better. ;) Cheers! --- Josie

Enjoyed it no end!

I don't think you need people to be kind -- you write so well! A great story -- thank you, and please have five stars.

Great story!!

Please continue this!! Your writing skills are great!

Uhh...

Why was the student at the house in the first place?

Amazing

Your story is amazing in the sex scenes but you need to buil up to it. I will give you 4 stars because there is always room to improve

very good

I thought this story was written great and I think u should keep going on another story... can't wait to read another one from u..

Love it

I just loved this story and I look forward to reading more about this theme in the future.

More of this tale of lust between them!

Very Good Story

Ignore the Anonymous critics, they are cowards. the "child" was over 18 so legal in that aspect, her being the teacher is a morale dilemma in a lot of ways, but a very frequent occurrence these days it seems.

as to the anonymous who asked why she was there, obviously their reading comprehension is very low, she was getting help from her teacher, not generally given at a private home usually, but again not unheard of.

as to Miss Austin doing the boyfriend, there isn't one, that is what the teacher used to get her "prize" not much different from some "players" in bars and clubs, saying what they think will get them their prize.

please keep up the stories, and thank you for sharing. 5 stars

Actually it's more than good.

awesome story

Please keep going don't leave us haning please very sexy hot story. Tell us how it started loved the story;-)

Tips for next time

Dear TFuta,

I have read a lot of these stories over the years and I have learned that to make a great story you need a few things. First, you need a good introduction. Second, you need to slowly build the story up while drawing the reader into it. When you get towards the sex element you need to make it sensational and exciting. You need to be able to draw the reader into the story and make them feel like they are watching a movie play out in their heads. The characters also needs to emphasize more emotion to each other. And finally, after they have finished with the sex element you need to leave the reader off with a ending where they want more.

Sincerely,
Captain_Robin

Bravo

Please don't stop writing keep making more and I'm sure gonna read on Nj wasssssss here

More!

Wow....just wow