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The Edge of Loneliness

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by Ashesh909/01/14

in close proximity...

but worlds apart

I 5-ed just for the beauty of these 2 lines .....

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by Ashesh909/01/14

kindness doth not come easy....

& coldness breaks my heart .....
even standalone these 2 lines would be superb philosophy !!

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by JWren09/01/14

You . . .

. . . reeled me in with your desperate words. Hope it's not a RL feeling.

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by Anonymous01/23/15

*****

Five.

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by Anonymous02/01/15

* !

ONE !

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by legerdemer02/09/15

It rings so true

Evocative, sad. The third stanza is gut-wrenching, full of the aspect of relationships that is hardly ever addressed by Lit authors. No question - 5.

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