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very stimulating
that was the greatest story i have ever read, and i have taken i n a few here at literotica. the way this small peckered man was belittled(no pun intended) turned me on greatly. all i can say is more humiliation please!!!
I hope..
this isn't a reflection of your home life.If it is you are sick.
Absolutely Delicious!
Hats off to you for an exceptional erotic adventure with this delicious ill-matched couple.
Short little hubby just does not measure up to satisfying this tall leggy goddess. His gorgeous statuesque bride deserves a well endowed dominant stud who will take charge. Hubby will reluctantly learn his place naked on his knees providing oral servitude to his sultry bride. He will be reduced to a wife watching voyeur who is teased, denied and humiliated while an employee bully takes control of his marriage.
Thank you for a very promising sexual adventure that will be developed into a great series very soon. Great work.
Wimpy Cuckold...
The writer is a good story-teller. Only I don't particularly like wimpy cuckold stories. I'm sure there must be an army of men out there who like the humiliation of being cuckoled by his wife while he watches. Maybe some counsoling would help. But. then again, maybe they don't want to be "cured".
"I'm looking for a new job. After all, what can I do about it?" Damn! what a question to ask... "There must be 50 ways to leave your lover..." Paul Simon said it so nicely.
no oh no
Don't like the wimpy husband stories, at least there could have been a dialogue between husband and wife, that would have made it better, in my opinion.
What the hell
Did they quit making .357 magnun pistols??
Nice, very nice
I can read this every few days and its stay interesting and stimulating. My only remark is that until the middle it's wonderful and unique, but then it becomes just another story.
Yo Mama is a Nigger cracka asshole
The story is funny and funky. I mean, the writer is obviously a small dick wimp or he loves punking small dicked wimps, whatever (maybe Author, you could be kind enough to clear that up, which one are you?).
I found it funny and entertaining. Not very erotic, but what the fuck. If a guy lets another guy treat him like that, he deserves what he gets. And anyway, the hubby enjoyed himself, didnt he? He loved to see Deb submit and take a good dicking. However, to really find true joy, hubby must be made to suck cock and be fucked up the ass too, in the next chapter.
And in response to that illiterate asshole who wrote "A Sory Written by a Nigger-Obviously", why the fuck are you talking shit about blacks. There was absolutely no mention of race in this story. You seem like you have an aissue with blacks, you white son of a bitch! You probably hate blacks but if there was a black man near you,m you wouldnt say shit, I bet. You would probably eat his ass and tongue fuck his hole if he told you to, you stupid slob. You need a slap in the face.
So many negative comments. It must be good
With so many moronic racist comments I knew the story had to be good. Just don't rush it next time. You developed the plot just fine but rushed through the sex
you've the right to write what you want
where its' crap or not,but i think this a slap in the face to every man who trying to be a man.strong men a hard to fine without you helping them to think weak as a man.all your stories are about weak men, why you feel you have to do that.
Fixed that for you
The last poster whines: "[T]his [is] a slap in the face to every man who trying to be a man."
Let's make that a correct statement, hmm-kay: "This story is a slap in the face to every man who is trying to be a man by reading stories about 'Loving Wives' on an internet porn site, hoping against hope that maybe one of these stories--virtually all of which involve a wife having sex with a man other than her husband--will finally feature a man just as 'strong' as the reader wishes he could be, if only the reader could stop himself from reading about guys who let their wives cheat on them."
There we go. All better now. No, no, don't bother to thank me. Just try to resist your urges a little more "strong"ly next time! Good luck with that!
Wish it was me...
I wish my wife would find a lover like that who would fuck her brains out in front of me. I'd love to see her suck a big hard cock and then get pounded into the floor while I watch. I wouldn't mind the humiliation either--some insults, a cock-slapping, maybe even forcing me to clean them up or take his cum on my face. I dream about finding us both a master all the time, so thanks for laying out my fantasy so plainly.
Fuck you
Hey author! This was one of the most offensive stories I've ever read. I WANT MY 5 MINUTES BACK. Fucking soft cock wimp. Shouldn't this be in the Gay Male section?
Oh FFS you twats below
It's a story, it's in the "Loving Wives" section, what the fuck did you think you'd be reading? Stop posting stupid comments and go get a life you morons!!!
I liked the build up. I'd like to read this same story from another perspective. Perhaps from the sex starved hotwife, or from the bully stud. I would love to know their back story.
Yikes,
I''l tell you what you could start by grow a set of balls wimp.
Why do most of you 'writers' insist on humiliating the man instead of calling it what it is - you make her act like a slut so let her be called SLUT.
Worthless Wimp
A quick shot from a double barrelled shot gun to the grion for Bully and the other barrel for the slut....no problem. Jail? No worse than what he has with Bully at work and the slut at home now.
I wish, I wish..
Stories like these deserve a zero, unfortunately the voting system doesn't let me!
why don't you let him fuck you too
you act like a little bitch so he treat you like one
I read only the comments.
This writers could not write a revenge story because a good revenge story MUST BE A ELABORATED PLOT and in the epilog the writer should write how the exhusband finds the happiness.
I am sorry
I wanted to write These writers ....
DWhuedogg is so stupid
he had to ask what number to dial for 9-1-1
And so was Anonymous.
Because DWheudogg was in the UK and the answer he got was 9-9-9!!!!
How About
I'm gonna blow your dick off prick, then divorce this idiot slut? Works for most stright men!
DWhuedogg wasn't in the UK
He was in the YMCA! That's where he loves to stay - "They have everything for young men to enjoy, he can hang out with all the boys"
how about a 12 guage
Right to his crotch of both of them?
CHICKEN SHIT, SISSY WIMP, CUCK,
all this and no JUEVOS to boot along with a teeny weeny, TK U MLJ LV NV
#2 THIS 03 STORY CRIES FOR AN EPILOG
all good authors here is an opportunity. TK U MLJ LV NV
Classic example of how comments inform the reader
huecuck and duna, biggest cuckolds on this board, identify with the "pin dick" character while those of us who still have our gear identify with the bully. Nothing more needs to be said, insecure twats feel threatened, guys with balls think the story is funny.
To the asshat anon below me:
you have a habit of mocking people who don't share your point of view, and also assume they're cucks.
the only "bulls" who brag are "bulls" who bang their hand instead of women.
as for gear size, only people with no dicks bring it up all the time.
kinda makes me wonder how many times you've wished yours was something bigger than a toothpick
Leave
Kill Paul and divorce the bitch. Then you get your balls back.
You might have to serve a few years at a place where bad people go but what the hell, it's better than being a cuck.
HA HA
once again anon
I know you're mad that I stop sleeping with your mom, I'm sorry guy, I had a better offer. It seems your wife got you to sit down with this author and tell your life story. I know in your comments you try to call me a cuck to hide the pain from all the readers. But they are among of a few other that have tasted your wife's charms. So calm down dude, we'll have her back by Friday 13, 2112.
this shows me
that people who favorite this story are the type who wants bad things to happen to people because they are scared of what would happen if the bully turned on them, they would shit their pants as for the author he is just an idiot who feeds of people weaknesses more then likely a scared little boy who wants his mommy.
Gad what a nother...
pile of trash. I wish I could vote a negative 5.
Good story
Had it all...domination, submission, a wanton woman, an aggressive bull. A classic cuckolding story.
Why?
Nothing in the story indicated that Hubby was excited during or after the bullying and humiliation! Embarrassment rarely leads to becoming sexually excited unless it is a previously established trait, so Hubby would be very unlikely to be pounding his pud. He MIGHT have been crying, but whacking off ... unlikely! She clearly does NOT want Hubby sexually any more and does not care about his humiliation at work!
Change jobs? Maybe!
Dump Sweetie? Immediately!
Fire Bull? Last year!!!
A little, fat sweaty lady with hairy warts who appreciates a guy who will poke her is much better than THIS beauty.
what a sick story
wimp dick or not there is no man who would take that abuse get a baseball bat and smash them both ..what a chucky author..
he didn't kill Paul?
what a loser.
What can you do?
After you find a new job or better yet figure out how to have him fired, throw the slut out and divorce her. Really? Buy a damn gun if you need it. Have a couple of friends beat him to a pulp. Not too hard to figure out what to do.
Please seriously dont write anymore!
You are a patheitc excuse for a man and anyone that would get exicted by a story like this is human waste!
the follow up should be the husband cutting off pauls cock, sewing the festering cunt of his wife closed after filling it with acid, and then killing himself to make sure he is completely out of the gene pool.
typical cockold
started ok, but when you introduced this hazing into the work place by others as well, we all know what will happen, then the affair, lets be real, he would not crawl off and cry, most cases he would have came out with a gun. if you do make a second chapter end it quick for the wife and the bully.
cantbuyabrain
needs to remove his decrepit genes from the pool, what a fucking loser....
The man is in YOUR house!
Get a gun and shoot him. While you're at it, line up your shot with the two of them and get them both together. End of problem.
Unbelievable...
...that he didn´t put Paul in the ground and divorce her cheating ass!
How could you write such a story without feeling the need to puke up?
Your Word Isn't Any Good
Your Bio says your straight and with no fetishes...wrong!
You're a cuck, insecure and have a very low self esteem...And...You get off on it.
Guess enough of the Lit readers convinced you to give up submitting you cuck dribble...Good!!!
The title of this story suggested you might do something about it. Damn, you're one sick idiot!!!!!
No fetish?!?...
...sorry, mate, I don´t believe that. Do you really enjoy writing this cuckold-crap? How about growing some balls?
I love this kind of.story, great job!
Thes are my favorite type of story and you do them well. I can't get enough of this type of thing. It's been over a year since my wife's lover who.was also.my asshole.boss moved away. He used us wonderfully, I.don't think.we could possibly get that lucky with another like.him.so.these stories will have to do. I also.love reading the hateful negative comments, these assholes are the exact kind of man I want to submit to.and worship. Would.like to see if they could be that negative after I suck him off while my wife rims him.
Help me please!!! Where do I find more stories like this? Any authors that readers recommend, here on Literotica or some other cuckold site I don't care!!! I will pay good money for stories like these!! This story is ridiculously hot I get wicked hot goin
To all the haters who read this story and then left a dumb comment about how you hate stories like this: I hate to break it to you, but you're totally missing the point, I'm afraid to say. Anyway, this is the only kind of cheating wife story that I like, with the husband getting all jealous and intimidated by the guy who is nailing his wife. I just cannot see what people find so sexy about letting your wife screw another guy! That takes all the fun out of it!!!! For me, and I think there are others that will agree with me on this, there are too many stories on this site that fall into the whole "willing cuckold" category: where the husband has to find a way to talk his wife into screwing another dude, cuz it's one of his deepest fantasies, to see how she would take it, whatever the hell the reason. This story has everything a humiliation pervert such as myself could want: it's got the sweet but sexually unsatisfied wife that loves her hubby but can't stop herself from flirting with her husbands bully coworker. I love the dynamic between the big, strong stud Paul, who has a huge dick, and the hubby with the small dick, I love love love it. There is a wonderfully hot sense of wickedness to stories like this one, so wicked it's evil, and evil is kinda hot. Anyway, this is the kind of story I am constantly looking for, and they are few and far between, not just on Literotica, but every other site that I've seen with a large selection of slutty wife stories. Is there anybody out there that is into these kinds of stories, that knows where to find them? Help me out, please
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