...sad ending. I sense it might be a true story, or partially so, especially the ending. Look forward to more of your writing.
It is a true story, including the end. I don't know if I could write fantasy after experiencing this!
Hope you write more.. Enjoyed it...
how can their juices mingle if he wore a condom?
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Hot short story, but...
...sad ending.
I sense it might be a true story, or partially so, especially the ending.
Look forward to more of your writing.
Thank you, northbaybear
It is a true story, including the end. I don't know if I could write fantasy after experiencing this!
Nice Start
Hope you write more.. Enjoyed it...
...
how can their juices mingle if he wore a condom?
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