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Well Done
Great story about the hypocrisy and corruption of man made religion. These disgusting people twist and distort the biblical faith and teachings to their own ends.
The sad thing is that theme of this story is most probably absolutely true and many many times repeated.
Very well written.
not to your usual high standard
I've enjoyed your stories very much and given them all a five, just not this one, a mere three. What happened? Summer slump?
Interesting fun tour of a possiblity
I admit that I find it difficult to believe in conspiracies of this size but it was fun.
Hm seems unfinished in many ways and very rushed
The end was too scattered to be fully understood - at east by me -
There needed to be some closure for the men and even the women's group -
Questions abound -
Hoiw did Madeline get Grace to help hang the men?
What did happen to the Mayor for his p[art?
Who did the men end up with if anyone after this??
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