Oh, The Summer Nights

Follow up

I hope you write, that was hot

*****

Five.

This was great. I hope there is at least a couple more chapters. X and Jada need a happy ending. Their love has lasted this long so they belong together.

Oh wow!

This is a diamond in the ruff ...... Well done. This is real passion and love at it's best. Hope to see more.

Awesome

Awesome story. Just awesome. Can't wait to read more!

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Great as a stand alone piece but of course we all want more more more! Great work!

Aww

This was so sweet!! It's good by itself but I'd love to read more!!

Revelry-reverie

revelry is noisy partying or merrymaking
reverie is when you are thinking about or remembering pleasant things

Otherwise, a good story with a much different take on things.

She only has one breast? That's only one error in the myriad that had you taken the time to read this out loud to yourself you would have noticed.

no stereotypes here

they are all reversed. so much potential, him, her, and the story.

Great!

I love this is was so sweet and sexy. I've been waiting for you to come back and write something. Now, if only you could update Murphy. Please don't give up on it I love that story.

Perfect tale for end of summer

Great story! I liked how you ended it, with a ray of hope. But......please continue with Giancarlo. I absolutely adored him! Thanks. ❤️❤️❤️

Enjoyed!

Great story, thanks for sharing it ...

me likey!!

Is Xavier a criminal? How old was Jada when she broke X off a piece? She was legal right? So good, more please!!

I love this new story but...

I NEED TOU TO FINISH GIANCARLO pretty please I love that story I've read it atleast 3 time with that said I love your new stuff your an awesome writer

Questions!

Yes X is a criminal, he's part of a drug ring. Jada was about nineteen when she let him knock the dust off that ass. Remember they grew up together so they're around the same age and toward the end shes around twenty-two twenty-three. Don't worry Both Gian and Murphy is coming back. Lastly, every story should end in hope

Why u gotta be so cold?

Please finish Murphy.

Gosh!

You never disappoint! This is off to a lovely start. Please continue! :) And please finish Murphy & Gian!

plssssssss kenny heart

Let's have Murphy. I've read it so many times in hope that you'll come finish it I check your wall regularly.
Hopeful

OMG!!

Wow I don't know if it's my period or something but for some reason this story hit home for me haha I was kinda teary eyed at some points lol I dunno but I really truly do love it. Please continue it.

This is still a love story, no matter what.

If she can not have Xavier forever can she at least have his children? What better way to end a tragic love story, but with the fact that his life will be extended thru his children!

Keep it up

Your stories are scary in a way that they are almost parallel to my life. Wtf? Seriously though, this is really good.

Holy Shit!

This was too fucking good. Please, please, please continue it!

PLEASE...

Please continue this story!

Excuse Me Ma'am!

A follow up is so needed here!