At first I didn't think the premise of your story would be very believable. But as I read it, I began to believe in these two characters. You did a very good job developing them, and the story was well-written and erotic.
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Anonymous09/02/14
loved it!
not too many stories dealing with anal, with a lesbian twist! Kudos to you for writing such a hot story!
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Anonymous09/05/14
Very arousing!
You did a very nice job of going slowly and building up the personalities of two women. I don't think you have written about lesbians at all. I think you have two close friends who are comfortable with each other, and you never wrote a lesbian scene, to my mind. Perhaps bi-curious would be the best description. Your writing is very professional, your character development is very well done, and you have not gone for cheap distasteful scat scenes. Look forward to seeing more of your material.
This is the first story of this genre of story I've ever read. I am not sure how to classify it? It was cute, very cute actually, erotic, subtle and stimulating. I'm actually at a loss for words, (Normally a good thing for me). I will read some of your other works. I'd like to explore your writing style some more. Oh, I rated you five. I a bit stingy on my ratings but it was very well done.
I didn't expect the story to go in that direction, so it was fun to read. The sex was hot. Nice work. I'm going to read some of your other stories. Thanks!
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Very well done
At first I didn't think the premise of your story would be very believable. But as I read it, I began to believe in these two characters. You did a very good job developing them, and the story was well-written and erotic.
loved it!
not too many stories dealing with anal, with a lesbian twist! Kudos to you for writing such a hot story!
Very arousing!
You did a very nice job of going slowly and building up the personalities of two women. I don't think you have written about lesbians at all. I think you have two close friends who are comfortable with each other, and you never wrote a lesbian scene, to my mind. Perhaps bi-curious would be the best description. Your writing is very professional, your character development is very well done, and you have not gone for cheap distasteful scat scenes. Look forward to seeing more of your material.
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This is the first story of this genre of story I've ever read. I am not sure how to classify it? It was cute, very cute actually, erotic, subtle and stimulating. I'm actually at a loss for words, (Normally a good thing for me). I will read some of your other works. I'd like to explore your writing style some more. Oh, I rated you five. I a bit stingy on my ratings but it was very well done.
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I didn't expect the story to go in that direction, so it was fun to read. The sex was hot. Nice work. I'm going to read some of your other stories. Thanks!
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HeyAll is an incredibly gifted writer, not of simple pornography, but of exquisite erotica. Select any one of the numerous stories to read and enjoy an incredible journey. What a talent.
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Good story thanks!
What a nice anal play!
Liked it a lot!
Likable characters, nice slow progression, and nice little surprise at the end-she really loosened up....
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