All Comments on 'My Cheerleader'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I just can't anymore

I was trying very hard not to like your stories because they are so short and I normally really dig the build up of tension between characters. But god damn....you are amazingly talented and have repeatedly delivered with such totality of a mind-blowing story I can no longer deny your prowess! By god, carry on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Your best story yet!

Amazing. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Too good!

Wow this story had me really wet from the beginning! Please continue writing more. I'm sure I'll enjoy them as much as I enjoyed this one (;

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow!

That was hot....I loved it but I really want it to continue. The library story would be so awesome! Please don't leave us hanging, you're a great writer and I'd really enjoy reading more about these characters. Please and Thank you!!

JimbabweK88JimbabweK88over 9 years ago
Fucking Hot!

Damn! That was one of the best stories I've read on this site. You have amazing talent for writing erotica. Wonderful! Beautiful!

asianToyasianToyover 9 years ago
Super hot

Wow.... I loved it. This is one for later tonight... me and my Hitachi! Thanks for the masturbation fodder.

asianToy

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 9 years ago
Ohhhh.

This was verrrry hot.

Great writing. Sexy, believable dialogue. I loved the psychology going on for each of them.

I look forward to reading about next Friday. Mmmm.

BowtothequeenBowtothequeenover 8 years ago
Thank you

Thanks for a lesbian sex scene that does not involve only pussy licking but also some good old finger fucking and thanks for the dirty talk.it truly is a erotic story.

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaover 8 years ago
Best story ever

I loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Mmmmmmmmm

My pussy is so wet... Thanks for that incredible story

Mymantoy999Mymantoy999over 7 years ago
Okay, this is my own personal issue BUT

this was a VERY GOOD short story. The only reason it is not an EXCELLENT story is that smoking is a HUGE TURNOFF for me. I was married to a smoker for many years and I hated kissing that ashtray.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This is amazing

You should write a part two involving the strap . Pleaaasssseeeeeeee!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Daaaammmm

Sizzling hot story. Definitely interested in the characters doing a lot more together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Can't wait for part 2

This is sooo HOT. My pussy is dripping wet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

How. The. Fuck. Did you get all those fantasies I have into one story? Fucking bravo! I'm getting my partner to read this and hopefully we'll roleplay it.

MarsPatrolMarsPatrolalmost 3 years ago

What a delightful pair of sluts 👏👏👏

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Needs a follow-up story.

Sunstone769Sunstone7693 months ago

Wish there was more to this.

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I've been a writer since middle school. And since that time I've been published both in print and on the web. I've been honing my skills writing poetry and short stories. I'm always working on a novel of course, but I've just found this new genre - fan fiction. I'm using that...