I was trying very hard not to like your stories because they are so short and I normally really dig the build up of tension between characters. But god damn....you are amazingly talented and have repeatedly delivered with such totality of a mind-blowing story I can no longer deny your prowess! By god, carry on!
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Anonymous08/31/14
Your best story yet!
Amazing. Please continue.
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Anonymous09/01/14
Too good!
Wow this story had me really wet from the beginning! Please continue writing more. I'm sure I'll enjoy them as much as I enjoyed this one (;
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Anonymous09/02/14
Wow!
That was hot....I loved it but I really want it to continue. The library story would be so awesome! Please don't leave us hanging, you're a great writer and I'd really enjoy reading more about these characters. Please and Thank you!!
This was verrrry hot.
Great writing. Sexy, believable dialogue. I loved the psychology going on for each of them.
I look forward to reading about next Friday. Mmmm.
Thanks for a lesbian sex scene that does not involve only pussy licking but also some good old finger fucking and thanks for the dirty talk.it truly is a erotic story.
this was a VERY GOOD short story. The only reason it is not an EXCELLENT story is that smoking is a HUGE TURNOFF for me. I was married to a smoker for many years and I hated kissing that ashtray.
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I just can't anymore
I was trying very hard not to like your stories because they are so short and I normally really dig the build up of tension between characters. But god damn....you are amazingly talented and have repeatedly delivered with such totality of a mind-blowing story I can no longer deny your prowess! By god, carry on!
Your best story yet!
Amazing. Please continue.
Too good!
Wow this story had me really wet from the beginning! Please continue writing more. I'm sure I'll enjoy them as much as I enjoyed this one (;
Wow!
That was hot....I loved it but I really want it to continue. The library story would be so awesome! Please don't leave us hanging, you're a great writer and I'd really enjoy reading more about these characters. Please and Thank you!!
Fucking Hot!
Damn! That was one of the best stories I've read on this site. You have amazing talent for writing erotica. Wonderful! Beautiful!
Super hot
Wow.... I loved it. This is one for later tonight... me and my Hitachi! Thanks for the masturbation fodder.
asianToy
Ohhhh.
This was verrrry hot.
Great writing. Sexy, believable dialogue. I loved the psychology going on for each of them.
I look forward to reading about next Friday. Mmmm.
Thank you
Thanks for a lesbian sex scene that does not involve only pussy licking but also some good old finger fucking and thanks for the dirty talk.it truly is a erotic story.
Best story ever
I loved it
Mmmmmmmmm
My pussy is so wet... Thanks for that incredible story
Okay, this is my own personal issue BUT
this was a VERY GOOD short story. The only reason it is not an EXCELLENT story is that smoking is a HUGE TURNOFF for me. I was married to a smoker for many years and I hated kissing that ashtray.
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