Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 16

Yeah!!

Thanks for the lastest chapter.

Thank you again...

Another great chapter to add to your remarkable story. Easily worth 5 stars. One wonders what Stilmnah will be hunting and if the victor's household will grow with 2 more dependants. Now we can only sit and wait.

excellent

Excellent!

Interesting idea

Like your possibility there Sid0604. Would make things even more interesting.

Thank you

Thanks for continuing to give us a good story. While I would love the entire story right now, it's good enough to be worth waiting for you to finish. Keep up the good work! It's been vey entertaining.

Keep it up.

You are doing great with this story. Keep up the good work. I am still trying to figure out why this story hasn't zoomed to the top of the SciFi section.

not bad...

Things are getting tight for the little troop. Wonder how they will deal with this ass. Should they just drop him where he stands or dress his ass on a pole like a flag..

More than one way to make a statement. (DON'T FUCK WITH ME......!)

Keep it coming.. I like it when you post often and longer segments.

Nothing but time on my hands. LOL

Ghost.

Another great chapter. It moves the story forward and sets up tension for the next one nicely.

Amazing story

Hey dude great story, the development of characters is awesome and I. An really see a lot of outcomes. Once you finish ..... And hopefully no time soon you should upload it to amazon and sell it. I would definitely buy it.

looks like

It looks like there are a couple of hunters that will soon find out the difference between fast and quick.
The question is, will they survive the lesson?

@gemman1

It probably isn't at the top already because:
1. It's a comparatively new series, relative to many long-existing ones.
2. Chapter-for-chapter, it is much shorter than many of the top series in the SF/F category, and, because it actually HAS a plot, people who only want stroke stories are less likely to read it. However, likewise, people who prefer longer stories are also less likely to read it.

Sucks to be them.
:)

On an unrelated note

Grouchy McAngerIssues should have learned the rule of Personal Preservation In The Face Of Uncertainty a LONG time ago.
"If you don't know what it is, assume it can and will kill you the instant you're noticed, and that you will be unable to kill it before it notices you. And then plan accordingly. Successful plans of this nature tend to revolve around the idea of 'Stay the fuck away from it and don't let it notice you.'"

Great story.

It really could be in the top 10 hall of fame for sf/f. It's just that good. I look forward to the plot resolution.

amazing way you have introduced the tribe without any hostilities. i like where you are going with this.

Exciting

Oh this is getting good. I love the introduction of the nomads. It keeps things fresh. Gives us a new shiny baubel to enjoy while we still explore the original cast.... I love you man! :'-}

DJ