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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/01/14

Its

much the same in my town!, keep up the good work...

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by Anonymous09/16/14

wow!

I can not wait to read more!
makes me sad, there's only one more chapter so far.

I'll be checking daily

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by Anonymous01/24/15

Bad research

You have no knowledge whatsoever about the world. Do you even know where Scandinavia is. If they would learn any language it would be Swedish or Norwegian. Not English. This is just stupid.

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