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by Anonymous09/02/14

Excellent!

5/5 on all counts.
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by RavenOnCa09/03/14

Very nice

Very nice story, believable, and very sexually charged indeed. I am so looking forward to the next chapter !!!

The story line seemed maybe a little far fetched, but still believable. Only suggestion I might have is give a little more detail as personal appearances, without having to spoil it with FF breasts or massive dick size.

Thanks again for the enjoyable read.

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