All Comments on 'Real Life ENF'

More, please!

Thank you for bringing it to us! Five stars and please write more.

To be pub locally humiliated - does that mean humiliated in the local pub?

The sister angle turned me off. A non-relative and it would have been hot.

Sorry about that, unlike most of the stories I write, I wrote this one on an iPad, and clearly I missed that error. Although, I was considering a scene with a pub :P

Where the rest of the story?

... but this one did nothing for me. It's childish, and not well defined. Knowing most sisters, and with no motives to speak of, this confrontation is just as likely to have ended in a fist fight. My suggestion is simple: Scrap this one page disaster, and rewrite it with some passion!

I do hope you continue this story. The adventures have just begun and it is off to such a wonderful start. I was hooked early and disappointed there wasn't more!

Please continue.

Blackmail Your Sister! Cool! Needs Lots More Chapters! Please, Even!

Couldn’t finish reading.