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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 9 years ago

I liked the suggestiveness of this, UYS. I might have chosen a different adjective than "transfixed" because it seemed redundant with "wonder."

As always, you know how to pack alot into few words.

MagnetronMagnetronover 9 years ago

Beautiful. And a lot classier than something similar that I wrote eons ago.

Sent her tumbling over the trellis

Oh, if only I could think that poetically.

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago

Succinct and delightful

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
THE HORTICULTIST'S LAMENT

on discovery. TK U MLJ LV NV

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