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by Anonymous09/03/14

Pleeeeaaaasssseeee PROOF READ

Amongst others -
“Oh! I forgot. I did have once change.” - ‘one’?
“It was being help al fresco …” - ‘held’?
Also, if someone had fucked her wouldn't there have been some 'liquid' evidence when she stood up? "I could still feel the heat in my loins." - nothing else??

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by Anonymous09/03/14

Thank you.

Good job, as always. :)

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by Anonymous09/04/14

Good story

Well written, interesting and hot. Thanks.

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