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Again she needs hubby for what?
His has no use except for earning money.
You packed a lot of action into one story! This story line has been done 1,000 times before: a wife who is disinterested in sex, a good friend with a giant cock who is recently divorced, blah, blah, blah.
But I like the fact that you made hubby a willing participant and instigator instead of a humiliated and subservient wimp. It was pretty shitty of the two of them to have sex without hubby's consent the first time, but this is fiction, and immorality has no real-world consequences.
Four stars from me. The BTB crowd will one-star this one to death. Any second now, some super-creative anonymous jackass will undoubtedly write: "This site has become cuckerotica!!!" SMH.
He should be furious, even if he was aroused.
After all, by not including hubby, they committed an affair. They did it even if he was against swinging. They fucked in spite of his feelings and he's ok with it? No, worse, he actively encouraged it? What the duck is wrong imwith these bank
Same old, same old
I am neither a fan of "burn the bitch" or cuckolds - I like inventive plots which build tension. This story was SOOOO predictable. Even if it had not been in the LW category one knew what was going to happen as soon as it was stated that Dave was recently divorced, presumably horny, and hanging around a lot.
I also like stories that are erotic, that is, of, relating to, or tending to arouse sexual desire or excitement. A guy puts his big cock in a willing woman with no seduction or chase worth mentioning doesn't cut it.
too easy
That she has sex with this other guy without even being seduced leads to the question of what is she doing while hubby is out earning the money?
From the other comments I'm not the only one wondering just what is in it for hubby?
Decent of him to lend his wife to a friend in need. Maybe Dave can repay him by mowing his lawn or washing his car, or something of equal value to him?
Re: MitchFraell
"Maybe Dave can repay him by mowing his lawn or washing his car, or something of equal value to him?"
Best laugh of the day because it sums up the story exactly.
How a good story can lost itself....
How a good story can lost itself....Very simple: 1st - What his wife and friend did behind him was pure cheating and she never showed any regrets...She evan said."Don't worry about him, he is already asleep. He won't be able to hear us down here in the basement,"!!! Where was her love for her husband of so many years? 2nd - What a friend the cheater was...even if he went through a rough stretch only a year ago when he got divorced when he caught his wife of nearly ten years cheating on him, he did the same to a good friend. 3rd - the supposed friend made his wife do things in public, not caring for their good name, after all she wasn't nothing to him, just a fuck!!! He even took her alone for one weekend. Finally: It would be very different if she before cheating had talked with her husband and confirmed that he would agree. No love in this story...Nobody loved nobody...so a sad story.
she has been fucking him for a year. the husband says he has not been getting much for a year. never a friend and lost a slut wife. that will take his money and retirement
My first wife, who was only 19 at the time, fucked my best buddy because he was very well hung
I made a mistake of telling her my buddy's dick was big (a bit over 8"). She started teasing him on account the size. I have had voyeur tendencies since i remember, was still young, confused, unassertive & she was teasing him in front of me. Once she pointed at his semi erect dick & said "you are displaying your package today." He took it out and said, "You are welcome to touch it if that's OK with my buddy. You are OK with that, bud, right?" I had mixed emotions, was confused, & nodded in agreement. She felt his dick by the book & complimented it. Later on i found out he had sex with her on 3 occasions & she was giving him BJs on a regular basis.
My wife
I wish a big cock stud like Dave was screwing my wife.
Not bad, but ..
This story really needs editing as it is full of errors; grammatical, wrong words, dropped letters, etc. For example, "he never seen it coming", "her and Dave played" are just a couple of examples. Also "she lowered Dave's pants down ...". You mean she didn't lower them up?
Otherwise a fairly enjoyable read.
Friend fulling
When I was taken to the army during the Korean War I told my (with 2 small children) to find a man to fill her needs when and if she wanted it.
I came home 18 months later and she explained who she found and introduced me to him and I watched as he fucked her. He fucked her for 2 years before a car accident to him. I watched several time when he visited and fucked her with no way to not make her pregnant except that she kept care to avid fucking during vertal time.
Giving her pleasure and yes I liked to watch as he filled her.
Oh yeah, it's all.....
....so illicit and exciting.....until it goes too far (well, actually I thought most of it was too far). An intriguing story idea, but not very original and starting to show up a little too often around here, IMHO.
Listen, if you're going to tell a story, try to paint a clearer picture of the characters.... Not just their physical features, but their personalities, motivations. Try to make them real. And try to cook up something original, maybe even taken from public records (you would not believe what turns up in court and police records!).
Oh, and get editorial help. Your writing, without considerable editing is atrocious.
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fantastic story!!!
Congratulations!
Friends
Great story, Keep'em up. Thanks.
Very good
The ending was a bit quick and a bit of a letdown though, as the rest was excellent. It would have been hot if she got pregnant with Dave.
This site has become cuckerotica.
There are you happy now prick? I gave it a resounding 1*. Now you really should be happy. Your crying is getting old, try something different.
Excellent!
I let my best buddy stop by and fuck my wife, they just have to let me be there. Not in the room if they'd like, but at least in the house. And I get to lick her out between their session if there is more than one.
PRETTY GOOD ****
Just a couple of comments. Friend sure seemed to get all the benefits and I believe you kept mixing your POV. If you write 1st person, like you did most of the time, you can't write about anything you don't see or have been told. You can't tell us what she felt during the act. You can if you stick with 3rd person, but an erotic story looses some of its impact with 3rd person. JUST SAYING--- GOOD LUCK I ENJOYED IT!
A sad story...
A cheating wife, a cheating friend that had been cheated by his wife, and a stupid and with no self-respect husband..Mix them all and the result: A bad and sad story...
He'll be back
Don't worry, Dave we be back. With the wild sex and things that he has been doing with your wife, it will not be long before he is back for her services and adventures.
Its also great to know that you helped a friend use your wife in a time of need and letting your wife explore some new adventures of her own. If everyone is happy and having the time of their life's, it can not be wrong.
Keep on writing and sharing.
Yet another pimping cuck story....
I guess the literotica audience wants them. More power to them I just wish the "author" had given some warning at the top so I wouldn't have wasted time on this now hackneyed cliche. Characters are two dimensional and the protagonist is a worm.
I had hoped for something more but it was obviously written by a man/husband hater.
And yeah, yeah, yeah, I haven't submitted anything but I am the consumer and my opinion counts as much as any "writer" making submissions here. So thanks for putting yourself out there. Please try to draw characters in the future who are more than cardboard cutouts and have some personality.
Wait this must have been a "stroke-piece". Nevermind.
NOW HE IS A CERTIFIED CUCK...SHE IS A CHEATER
and now "Daves' not here" Will he reciprocate. TK U MLJ LV NV
1 Star!
More sick/cuck/bullshit this site is on it's last legs!
Gave it a 5
good story and cucking1
What about the vacation?
Would really love to read a sequel about them going on the vacation together. Seems like it could be lots of fun and a very interesting read.
I was enjoying it as i love stories about wife sharing,but when dave took her home and now wants to take her on vacation that was the end for me. Iknow some people are into that but to me it spells divorce.
Good story
I would have preferred a "seduction" with a reluctant wife, but this was good.
Wife Leaves Husband of 20 Years For BIG Cock!
What is it with all these husbands that want to watch their wives being fucked by big-dicked studs?! If Dave hadn't found someone,after weekends & vacations slippin' Jen the BIG SALAMI, the dipshit husband would have found himself all alone. (Another cheap,slut,twat wife,by the way!)
Best Friends
Best Friends my ass - why didn't Dave have the balls to tell his "best friend" that he was horny around Jen and see what his friend had to say about moving things on? Another marriage down the drain of big cock fantasy land.
Excellent! So fucking hard!!!
Don't know who the Anonymous asshole is but he needs to focus on church websites.
Fantastic story and my cock is throbbing. Nothing better than watching my wife fuck. I have been blessed by being able to see my wife fuck many men over the years and it is always amazingly erotic! Love sharing and watching her while I jack off and join in 😄
☆☆☆☆☆- (4.55/5.0 = 91% = A) The story is very erotic. Very realistic too. My cup of tea. This is a must read for whoever is into voyeur husband stuff!
The story is totally realistic.
The scene where the husband goes back to the basement & inadvertently witnesses Dave fucking Jen's brains out is PRICELESS! The husband's reaction was depicted very accurately.
When something similar happened to me, i was unable to interrupt my wife & my friend. I was totally mesmerized, transfixed with elation when i was not supposed to feel angry... I was rendered stunned, groggy, paralysed... the event i was witnessing had tectonic effect on my psyche. My hitherto-suppressed voyeur side was realeased in the open & at the very moment, all i knew was that i must watch them because i would never have such an opportunity again...
I watched them for less than two minutes but the vivid memory of what i saw is still deeply engraved in my mind 25 years later.
The situation gave me a HIGH which i have been seeking to experience ever since.
It is not easy to be a wannabe cuck because you are afraid you may lose your wife's respect & love. The alternative is to be who you are not, which is not easy either.
Size Matters and shared expereince is worth 5* for an enjoyable read.
Have to say I'm a sucker for a good wife sharing story. and they come no better than this. A story, even if true, where the stud has a smaller cock than hubby just wouldn't be the same. Size does matter to most women and men and those that have small cocks would do well to follow this example of friends being just that and taking the friendship up a level to please both of them. Hubby obviously had voyeuristic inclinations otherwise, he would have exploded at the first indication of intimacy because there was a fair lead-up of flirting before the sex.
I think this scenario is very common amongst good friends who suddenly find one of them has lost a partner, especially where there has always been a sexual attraction amongst the group.
I have to put my hand up to having a similar experience and I can tell you MFM is very erotic and intense. So don't knock it until you have tried it!
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