Kim & Kate Ch. 02

proceed

OK, nothing really happened here, but I a giving you benefit of doubt that you are building up to something. The domination by the two needs to start fairly soon though, or you'll lose your audience. Jedd

This is an amazing story. Sleep going.

You mention a parallel story from the wife's pov. It would be good to do before this goes to far (pun intended). I know this is in Fetish, but it is difficult to suspend the disbelief at the entire situation. This is especially so as you have started the boulder rolling down hill.

great story

Keep writing

my life story

This is my life story.I am the Kate in my life...

MORE MORE MORE

Awesome

You gotta finish. This is awesome. My wife is a teacher, with lots of hot students.

More please

Great story, love your writing style.

more more more pleeeease?

want much more

More!

Can,t wait for the schoolgirl to get her wish!

Please finish this hot story!

Really enjoying this sexyhot story and very much looking forward to more....!

Please please please write another chapter?

Equisite ,Hot , Nasty , Delicious story

one can only guess that the volume of Negative Feedback has scared the Author away from continuing the story .

As Usual the Haters&Flamers .. seem to have Silenced an imaginative & engaging writer.

is a shame ...
if 10 trolls dislike something , they all attack the source with vitriol.

if 100 people Like Something , the Author is Lucky if they get one encouraging response.

xxxhugsxxx

5 STARS for imagination & for daring to write about these themes.

I will finish

Hello everybody and thank you so much for the feedback and support I have received on my writing. I wanted to leave a comment here to let you know that I WILL finish these stories. I have just been extremely busy and unable to work on them recently but I promise to give you guys the best ending I can imagine. Thanks again!

perfect fantasy

This is one of the best stories I have ever red. Please give us a new chapter :)