Gemini

Please continue and in greater detail.

Omg

Omg hot hot hot. Please continue.

Highly erotic -nothing Short OR SWEET

Nothing Short OR SWEET about it - soo much packed into this well crafted artistic achievement. I honestly was looking forward to 'learning' how two gay guys were going to appease this horny babe. But you didn't disappoint this reader one bit. Totally amazing how stimulating so few words can be. I WANT TO BE YOU! Being the baby sitter is one thing, but having your talent to write like this is a tops on my Bucket List. Oh what a blessing on this Thanksgiving Holiday.

MY BAD; I'm old

My oversight. I draft my comment offline hoping to get all the word Just Right; then copy & paste. My last post was intended for another fine author (write to me if you want the link) but I returned to the wrong open browser tab

. GEMINI is equally erotic, and much shorter - to the point and very well written. It tells how to start a fire, fan the flames and promise the sparks will blaze again, and again. This teaser is a brief glimps of the more intense, well-planned episode in Orange Moon. Please read on to warm your cockles for the holiday.

Sweet

Sweet concept, the subtlety is there, the plot twist, but the sex could have been more fleshed out ;)