All Comments on 'On A Mission Ch. 01'

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mysterwritermysterwriterover 20 years ago
Hitting On All Cylinders

This story pushed buttons I didn't know I had. I hope it improves with subsequent readings because I plan on revisiting it frequently.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
sweet

nice story, or is it?

you built nice players in the game...and kept the game going very nicely.

WoodyTheWise

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Way to go Katie!

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