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Ewww
All of the writer's stated goals have been met in this masterpiece of... Whatever it is it's a masterpiece, i'm sure of it.
Truly the worst
No-one comes close to this stinker when it comes to irrelevant info, disturbing personal notes, and boredom. It's unsexy, tedious, and dreadful!
fuckall!
I read this long ago and far away, before pubic, erm, public comments, but I remember I felt paralyzed by the verbiage and untold repetitiosness. This bloke needs a life.
Perdita (winking smilie here)
Oh happy joy!!!!!
Loved it!!! Bless your heart, it was a delight! I was laughing so much I had to send my husband a link to the story, as he was wondering why I was giggling so insanely on an erotica site. Life is good, good, GOOD!!!!!!
Too funny!
The run on sentences, the endless repetition, tales out of nowhere appearing for reasons unfathomable, parentheses nesting, mating, and reproducing at a dizzying pace...
Just too perfectly done. Reminds me of Weird Al's Albuquerque for absolute absurdity (Hope that's a compliment to you (It's a compliment from me for sure))
Hillarious!
A masterpiece
Not sure what it's a masterpiece of, but a masterpiece nonetheless!
What I find truly intriguing is how much it reminds me of the output of one of Lit's more prolific writers. But this came first.
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