I enjoyed reading the Beginning of your story and look forward to reading many more chapters. Thank you for sharing.
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Anonymous09/05/14
Awesome!
Wow! That was a thoroughly entertaining and interesting start. I wonder if Mama mermaid is gone forever, or if she'll pop back up again, and I can't wait to see what happens with the new Dad and hybrid baby. Very different and intriguing tale you're weaving! I can't wait to see where you go with this! 5* from me!!! I look forward to the next chapter!
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Anonymous09/05/14
Cool and inviting
The first dip into this world was a refreshing change from all the wolf-vampire stories that flood the Non-Human category.
But it was also a well thought out and enjoyably written tale. I can only repeat what read somewhere that "of all the fishes in the sea, the mermaid is the one for me".
If this is just the first chapter, I am looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
Thank you!
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Anonymous09/06/14
you're doing great!
this story is both meaningful and a good read. TBH, it's just plain refreshing and interesting. keep it up.
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Anonymous09/07/14
wow give me more
i can say (with a bloated ego) that i have read MANY stories online. all different in there own way but damn i have never in a very long time read a story that has caught my attention like *snap* that. cant wait to read more ... first story i read on this site and im whole heartedly satisfied.
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Thank you...
I enjoyed reading the Beginning of your story and look forward to reading many more chapters. Thank you for sharing.
Awesome!
Wow! That was a thoroughly entertaining and interesting start. I wonder if Mama mermaid is gone forever, or if she'll pop back up again, and I can't wait to see what happens with the new Dad and hybrid baby. Very different and intriguing tale you're weaving! I can't wait to see where you go with this! 5* from me!!! I look forward to the next chapter!
Cool and inviting
The first dip into this world was a refreshing change from all the wolf-vampire stories that flood the Non-Human category.
But it was also a well thought out and enjoyably written tale. I can only repeat what read somewhere that "of all the fishes in the sea, the mermaid is the one for me".
If this is just the first chapter, I am looking forward to seeing where the story goes.
Thank you!
you're doing great!
this story is both meaningful and a good read. TBH, it's just plain refreshing and interesting. keep it up.
wow give me more
i can say (with a bloated ego) that i have read MANY stories online. all different in there own way but damn i have never in a very long time read a story that has caught my attention like *snap* that. cant wait to read more ... first story i read on this site and im whole heartedly satisfied.
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