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My First Lover, Ten Pt. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/07/14

Great story!

Keith (Ten) is so careful and so caring, and your details are wonderful. I did miss the chest hair, though, as I think someone as mature and well developed as Ten would sport a healthy dose of chest hair for Julia to enjoy. How about another story of their passion that includes a description of that gorgeous Ten?

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by Loving5009/07/14

Thank you, Anonymous.

I had forgotten all about including chest hair on Ten. Sorry.

I think I may add to the story and better describe him. He really was a god in my eyes. I wonder how he's aged. It would be interesting to look him up.

I love reading comments about my writing. Please, readers, share opinions if you're willing.

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by Anonymous09/19/14

Well done

I love first time stories. I have had the pleasure of taking the virginity of 6 different girls.
On two occasions I was the guilty party of a wham bam thank you ma'am experience where I just took what was offered. I think I enjoyed it as much as the girls. With the others, by judicious use of tongue and fingers ( with a little alcohol to remove inhibitions) the experience for both was sensational. I ensured that the girl would have 2 or 3 intense orgasms after which they were eager to be impaled on my 7inch cock. Only 7 inches but with a huge mushroom head and a lovely upward curl that would massage their G spot until they erupted. By taking my time I had some girls who would cum by ear lobe stimulation, nipple stimulation and of course clit stimulation. One then two and sometimes 3 fingers in their cunt would have them dripping and ready. Turn them over, doggy position and a finger pumping in their arse would drive them insane
I believe that conquest is easy with orgasms.
It was never necessary for flowers or candles to get the right result. Privacy was always good for their first time.
Incidentally, here in Australia girls are fairly active and with previous fingering and tampons, hymens have usually disappeared well before their first experience. A much cleaner situation without blood

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by Anonymous09/19/14

I agree

I agree with the previous submission
We are all put on earth to procreate to ensure survival of the species. Virginity is not a natural way to live your life post puberty. I have always found that by pushing the right buttons, legs open and fucking is as natural as breathing. If you want to fuck once be rough, aggressive and after you have been in the cunt you will never get there again. Gentle, reassuring sex is a winner. Start with kissing. Tease her nipples. By now her clothes will be coming off. If she is responding, she will be stroking your prick or if she has some experience your cock will be in her mouth. If so repay the favour. Delicate tongue work on the labia, clot and tease her arsehole Explore her body and work out what she likes. Stimulate the clit stretch the cunt with your fingers and you are in. Be sensible and you can have the cunt as often as you want. I have been on this earth for 46 years and I would love to know how many cunts I have pleasured. How many virgins? Who knows. I don't fuck, I make love with the woman. It does not matter how old they are. If they are fertile they will be available as long as you are sensible

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by DG Hear10/03/14

Much improved

You can tell that your writing improved over the last two chapters. As I said in the previous chapter, I do believe this to be a true story. I think the age thing was purely for the sites benefit but your detail is really good. I could picture you at your computer remembering and writing in the details as you remembered them and smiling while doing so. It was a deserved 5*
Thanks for the read.
DG Hear

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