All Comments on 'Obey Me!'

I admit I had my doubts when the story started, but, my heavens, did Scorpio blend intelligence with sensuality with an artistry that's rarely seen in Lit stories! This story kept getting hotter and hotter without falling into a mere sex for sex sake story. The main objective is kept firmly in mind and accomplished with a sensitivity that keeps the reader entranced.

Extremely nice writing, Scorpio, and I don't say that often.

Geat story man!

Great story man!

Finding the right buttons sure paid off big.

I would be worried that someone might get domineering when he wasn't with her.

Maybe it only works with him??

This was a very sensual story.Just loved it.It was a great turn on for my wife and myself

Brian was very creative in bringing out thebest in his wife. Some of the things he did were very daring, but erotic. He must have been hold back from sex a long time himself, because he had fucked three times before he got home. Do you think he had gotten hold of some viagra or one of those other sex pills for longer, harder erections?

as i leaned over the garden wall, drained the voice that had called out for us to keep quite suddenly seemed to be talking to Brien - sorry about the noise mate but she just can't get enough etc

Great story, would like to read more. Damn, that was waaaaaay hot!

Just the right level to be hot - erotic - and just believable

Super hot and erotic.

I'm glad that the sex just stayed between the man and his wife. It seemed to be hotter that way.

To finally give her an orgasm would be so erotic and to have her become so orgasmic was a perfect storyline.

Thanks for the good read.

nice little husband and wife story

Totally amazing and orgasmic. I came twice reading this.

It was a great story just great

A very hot, erotic story that has a happy ending for a loving couple.

Thanks for sharing.

At least in this one you two stay faithful to each other. I love these type of stories.

too bad the author can't write well.

A great story of a loving caring husband and a loving trusting wife I had a hard cock nearly all the time. Very erotic.

Great loving husband/wife story

5 stars

Always enjoy a story about a loving husband and wife.

A good one handed read

I loved it.

Thank you for sharing