...especially the conclusion. No depth, even the sex and punishment are rattled off like a bored recitation. Complete waste of a chapter- the toothbrush technique used on Aeon was practically cut and pasted from Chapter 2. Then let's rush and wrap it up so we can finish with a single paragraph at the end.
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Reads like a fourth grade book report...
...especially the conclusion. No depth, even the sex and punishment are rattled off like a bored recitation. Complete waste of a chapter- the toothbrush technique used on Aeon was practically cut and pasted from Chapter 2. Then let's rush and wrap it up so we can finish with a single paragraph at the end.
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