All Comments on 'Life of James Ch. 02'

by Wannabe Chick

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
WOW!!

That was the best orgasim I have had since losing my virginity. I am not a man but I sure wish it was me instead of James. Great story keep them coming! :>

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Awesome!

Your a great writer. I hope you keep writing gay fiction.

jezebellajezebellaover 18 years ago
very realistic

the hesitation...mutual lust...sex...all of it adds up to a great and sensual story... can we have some more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
So sexy and sensual...

Damn! This tale made this girl all hot & wet. You're a good writer, definitely keep writing! Few stories make me have a orgasm like this one. It is hot in here? lol. Thank you! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yum

Deliciously sexy and a tribute to the fruitful outcomes (no pun intended) of guys willing to take a leap.

robin48robin48about 18 years ago
French-kissing

"French-kissing another boy "is so HOT

I love cherry popping time..so did the hero nice story and made me wet in the lacy's

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sooooo hot....and well written too

This is a great story! So very hot and sweet! I was wildly turned on, and thought the tension throughout was great. Keep 'em cumming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fabulous

I think I fell in love with you. Clue: Latin

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
great

maybe someone else at the party could come in and catch them and join in9

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Real for me!

Love the story, especially since it reminds me of last weekend. It wasn't the first time for either of us and our intention was to have sex from the beginning but, it was so real for me because the sex sounded so much like what we did. He is really big too and it scared me a little, but after he was in it felt fantastic! Very realistic story and it made me very hard!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Another!

Make another! Great writing, I enjoyed reading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More? I think yes

This was too cute!! I adored it. I compared it to the writing of Sean Wolf (who is pretty darn amazing!!) I think we all need more if this :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
feedback no1

This is actually not bad, not cheesy enough to be stereotype and yet hot enough for this site.

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2almost 7 years ago
2017 and Still Erotic

It's still like any other first kiss. Someone has to make the first move in every new adventure. That happened the night they turned the lights out, and announced anything goes as long as each partner agrees. Except for possible stubble, a blow job doesn't care what sex belongs to the lips. "Lights Out" is a good party starter, and really doesn't require being drunk. Great intro and great characters - hot details. Thanks for taking the time for the action to develop. Your script stands the test of time. Thanks for sharing. Tony C

chastrchastralmost 5 years ago
from the fuckee's point of view...

I would really love to read about someone else's feelings of how a nice cock feels inside you. I LOVE when it's long enough to push through inner sphincter, and how ass lubes itself. also love feeling of being full of cum. the story part was terrific!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

might need some editing but made me cum many good times

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