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by Ashesh909/08/14

Heat , street , eats in S1 rhymes with. Beat in S2 :

Clime & rhyme in S2 goes with time , dime & lime in S3 ! Nice rhymin' scheme interweavin' diff. Stanzas . This strange dark son of a balmy clime : is he Indian or Brazilian as Mango is a fave fruit in these 2 countries ?
You do mention he survives on bread , water , lime 'n mango .....& drugs ?
An enigmatic charachter Sean : always dancin' to an invisible beat & thnx for sharin' .

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