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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh909/07/14

That's witty you turned teenage male fantasy Moms I'd like .........on it's head !

I fived this just for the Role Reversal .

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by todski2809/08/14

I really enjoyed all of these

not only for the cliché inversion of milf,
the yearning and wants are palpable, your descriptions flit between clinical and sexual which highlights the "middle aged" part, and helps to drive your main points home.

"I but sit in squirmed admiration" I feel this line may need a rework, the but where it is seems out of place to me.

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